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1994-1996
Hong Kong started 1994 with profits $30M, while Singapore began with profits $40M. The growth rate of Hong Kong was consistent during this period beacuse of the pre handover boom in Hong Kong. However, Singapore reached the peak when the profit was nearly $50M and remained unchanged from 1995-1996. It was probably because the government introduved the tight taxation polity.
1996-1998
The profits of Hong Kong rose continuously untill 1997 and then fell dramatically to $30M. The reason for this was enterprises felt depressed about handover. On the other hand, profits in Singapore were declined steadily during this period. It was apparent that the change of taxation polity affected the profits constantly.
1998-2001
Hong Kong hit the trough at profits $ 20M in 1999 and then rebounded gradually, while the profits of Singapore were remain unchanged from 1998 to 1999 and then decreased continuously. The explanation for the increase in profits in Hong Kong was the marked growth of China market. In contrast, it might be because Singapore faced keen competition from Malaysia during this period.
According to the table 4, the senior and junior staff are generally satisfied on aspects of light, thermal comfort, air quality and decoration. However, the satisfaction of office furniture, equipment and pantry are not as high as other aspects.
Office furniture
Three quarters of senior staff are satisfied with the office furniture while under half of junior staff are satisfied with this aspect. This may be because the furnitures of senior staff has been replaced recently, but jounior staff use old furnitures. The implications of this is that junior staff cannot work efficiently.
Equipment
Over 70% of senior staff are satisfied with the quality of equipment while less than a third of junior staff are satisfied with this aspect. A possible reason for this is that senior staff have higher priority to use advanced equipment in office than junior staff. This may affect the general productivity of junior staff.
Pantry
Neither senior and junior staff are content with the pantry with only half of them expressing satisfaction. It appears that there is poor hygiene environment in pantry. As a result of this is that the health of staff will be deteriorated.
with profits of HK$30 million
Spelling - because,introduced, until, junior
It / This was probably...
..were declined steadily...
Profits in Hong Kong hit the trough of at profits $ 20M in 1999
Singapore were remained unchanged
it might have been because (past tense reason)
..satisfied on with the aspects
Furniture (no 's')
You need to expand a little on the implications.
You need to use a greater variety of vocabulary and grammar structures.
1994-1996
Hong Kong started 1994 with profits $30M, while Singapore began with profits $40M. The growth rate of Hong Kong was consistent during this period beacuse of the pre handover boom in Hong Kong. However, Singapore reached the peak when the profit was nearly $50M and remained unchanged from 1995-1996. It was probably because the government introduved the tight taxation polity.
1996-1998
The profits of Hong Kong rose continuously untill 1997 and then fell dramatically to $30M. The reason for this was enterprises felt depressed about handover. On the other hand, profits in Singapore were declined steadily during this period. It was apparent that the change of taxation polity affected the profits constantly.
1998-2001
Hong Kong hit the trough at profits $ 20M in 1999 and then rebounded gradually, while the profits of Singapore were remain unchanged from 1998 to 1999 and then decreased continuously. The explanation for the increase in profits in Hong Kong was the marked growth of China market. In contrast, it might be because Singapore faced keen competition from Malaysia during this period.
According to the table 4, the senior and junior staff are generally satisfied on aspects of light, thermal comfort, air quality and decoration. However, the satisfaction of office furniture, equipment and pantry are not as high as other aspects.
Office furniture
Three quarters of senior staff are satisfied with the office furniture while under half of junior staff are satisfied with this aspect. This may be because the furnitures of senior staff has been replaced recently, but jounior staff use old furnitures. The implications of this is that junior staff cannot work efficiently.
Equipment
Over 70% of senior staff are satisfied with the quality of equipment while less than a third of junior staff are satisfied with this aspect. A possible reason for this is that senior staff have higher priority to use advanced equipment in office than junior staff. This may affect the general productivity of junior staff.
Pantry
Neither senior and junior staff are content with the pantry with only half of them expressing satisfaction. It appears that there is poor hygiene environment in pantry. As a result of this is that the health of staff will be deteriorated.